Temeraire :3

I edited the chapter.

Just my two cents on the rather lumpish explanation on the first Goblin War, but you don't need it here. There's no need to explain the backstory this early, and ...

Actually, this was going to turn out as a prologue. All the people you see here will be vital in the latter parts of the story. That is why I ...

Is it more readable now, Snoink?

Thanks Snoink! I'll check out the links.

Look at my blog for chapter 1.

First of all, great idea in getting all of your information down first. I like the different species that you used and how you described each one. My favorite were ...

I'm finishing up the world map, so stay tuned for new info.

Updated the first post. Will begin on ships now.

Thanks May! Since you can see I am very serious when it comes to descriptions, you can probably imagine why I hate doing Book Reports that can only be a ...

No, you understood me wrong xD I was reviewing a written story, already published =P But however, the story I am planning to write will seem like it is from ...

*to the harness* yay! I like the sound of that. But that's going to be awfully inconvienient for quick drops for the soliders to become infanty... >_> And would your ...

Hey Temeraire- it just so happens, I have my own dragons in my stories, too! And yours are good, by the way. :-D I'd offer to draw them, but I ...

Ooooooh, I'll comment. Okay, one, the Northerners are pretty awesome. I love penguins and reindeer. Seccond: So this is basically the outline of the beings who live in your world, ...

I was hoping for comments on what I have so far...